Really well plotted! I love the way you have Dean trying (mostly succeeding) in sliding back into his old skin, pulling his old cons but with these pangs of Sam in the background. The scene with the mother was so well done, the way he is torn between needing someone to grieve with and keeping his own "professionalism".
Looking forward to seeing where you go from here, much enjoying your stories.
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Date: 2010-06-20 01:27 am (UTC)Looking forward to seeing where you go from here, much enjoying your stories.